Autumn Fall

Kia Ora Bloggers
 Hi guys today in writing I have been writing about Autumn fall. First we did a title.Next I did an introduction after I searched Autumn fall images.Also I was  writing a report about Autumn.

Then we edit our work and we had to edit it to see if we can change it and make it look better.Lastly we had to read it to make sure it makes sense before we published it. Please open the link to my report  and comment on how great it is or something I need to work on.

 

Improving Blog Comments

Kia ora my name is Amara and today in class I have been fixing up blog comments here is my work

Kia ora my name is Amara and today in class I have been fixing up blog comments here is my work

I have been fixing up Dylans blog post because he had done one positive thing but didn't do something thoughtful helpful or add a queistion.

My Blog Profile

Hi my name is Amara and Today in class I have been sharing my learning Enjoy

My Google background

Kia ora everybody today we were making are own google and changed colors😇

Hope you liked it Ka Kite

https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/177224273/#editor

My story about fairyland

 

Hello guys, In the past few weeks we have been writing a narritve it is  a story that we can make up.

We were allowed to choose what kind of fairytale we wanted to write about. We could choose a good charactar and a bad charecter to indroduce them in the story to tell what happened  in the story.💜

Link to Fairyland😄

Hi everyone today in writing about a mammoth stuck in the ice and a person using a hair dryer to get it out.

Link to my story

Fixing up a blog comment

Hi everyone

Today we are doing Cybersmart and we are learning to do a positive and thoughtful and helpful comment and at the end we add a question to do a blog comment.we are using a diagram to comment to show people that do a positive,thoughtful,and helpful comment and a question at the end.

Bye Bye bloggers!!!