Writing about a disgusting sandwich🥪
Asalaam Alaikum everyone. Today I am going to be blogging about writing about a disgusting sandwich. Since we are in lockdown we get online tasks to do. We get reading, writing, and maths. We also get some other fun tasks to do. For our writing we had to write about a disgusting sandwich on earth. I did a really smelly sandwich and it sounded really disgusting. I really enjoyed writing about the disgusting sandwich because it gave us a idea of how to write a recipe for others to follow. The proccess of me learning it is because if I had to write a recipe that I had to share that it means others should follow it and know what to do and do the right thing.
Here is a link to my recipe on my disgusting sandwich on earth. (Don't actually try making it.)
Asalaam Alaikum Amara. Well done on making me feel ghastly! Raw onions! Thanks for the warning.
ReplyDeleteThe steps in your recipe are clear and easy to follow with creative ingredients. Did you know that stewed plums are usually delicious? Maybe there was no sugar!
Keep up the great online learning.
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DeleteKa pai Amara. The ingredients were sounding ok until the sock! I'd seen this lesson on your class site so it's good to see a completed version. You're right about having to make sure other people can follow your instructions.It's great that you're thinking about your audience like that. Maybe you could add a screenshot of your work to hook more readers in? Or even create a drawing of your sandwich on Google Draw?
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DeleteDelicious sandwich I think not. A sock would be very difficult to bite. Onions and plums are an interesting mix together. Great instructions on how to make it, you have been very clear and its in order. Keep up your good work.
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