Improving Blog Comments

Kia ora my name is Amara and today in class I have been fixing up blog comments here is my work

Kia ora my name is Amara and today in class I have been fixing up blog comments here is my work

I have been fixing up Dylans blog post because he had done one positive thing but didn't do something thoughtful helpful or add a queistion.

My Blog Profile

Hi my name is Amara and Today in class I have been sharing my learning Enjoy

My Google background

Kia ora everybody today we were making are own google and changed colors😇

Hope you liked it Ka Kite

https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/177224273/#editor

My story about fairyland

 

Hello guys, In the past few weeks we have been writing a narritve it is  a story that we can make up.

We were allowed to choose what kind of fairytale we wanted to write about. We could choose a good charactar and a bad charecter to indroduce them in the story to tell what happened  in the story.💜

Link to Fairyland😄

Hi everyone today in writing about a mammoth stuck in the ice and a person using a hair dryer to get it out.

Link to my story

Fixing up a blog comment

Hi everyone

Today we are doing Cybersmart and we are learning to do a positive and thoughtful and helpful comment and at the end we add a question to do a blog comment.we are using a diagram to comment to show people that do a positive,thoughtful,and helpful comment and a question at the end.

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