Thursday, 15 August 2019

Improving Blog Comments

Kia ora my name is Amara and today in class I have been fixing up blog comments here is my work
Kia ora my name is Amara and today in class I have been fixing up blog comments here is my work
I have been fixing up Dylans blog post because he had done one positive thing but didn't do something thoughtful helpful or add a queistion.

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  1. Mrs McLellan21 August 2019 at 20:58

    Hi Amara, You've certainly improved the feedback Dylan could have given Charlotte. I can see you have made comments that are positive, thoughtful and helpful. As you look at what you have published on your blog today, what could you improve next time you post?

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